Youngest On Web Tell Me What You Think Of My Ending To The Short Story "August Heat"?

Tell me what you think of my ending to the short story "August Heat"? - youngest on web

Only if I have never read of August, the heat, here is a web link .. http://www.donaldtyson.com/august.html

The words "we are in the midst of life resulting in death". Repeating in my head, sending a chill very disheartening.
"Do you mind if I bother to play music? Me very much." Question Atkinson.
"Absolutely not." I replied with a smile.
At the corner of the room, an old record player is this time that my own sister. Atkinson, walks to the camera and when Atkinson dropped the jib of the space is filled with music.
"I hope it does not matter to the classics. Henry parcel is one of my favorites."
The heat is the air in the stuffy room is almost unbearable. Atkinson barely speak, his breathing gharder and be quiet in his soft voice is hoarse.
"It was only five years old orphan ... what?"
"... What?" I say and look into confusion
"Since the death of his sister."
How do you know that ... no ... vol. It's very personal "
"It was a pretty girl so young ... but in the midst of life we are in death: from May we are looking angry for help, but from thee, O Lord, for our sins art justly too? However, Savior, Lord, mighty, holy and merciful, we offer the bitter pains of eternal death. "
Atkinson says his work to light, you can now see more clearly. I had what I think is the most remarkable day in my life, and while these events are stillThe costs and flashing before me in my last minutes of my last words on paper as clearly as possible.

Because it is a chisel, but a scythe.

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Where can I get the following in Pune -- gongura pickles, Maple Syrup, IMPCOPS Chyavanaprash? - maples,pune

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